Redflame ~ My Take

November 25, 2007

Sunday Reflections

Filed under: Uncategorized — R. Dean Tribble @ 9:50 pm

Today’s Haiku

Rocks fall from a cliff

A fly alights a dunghill

Details in a changing world

Fall is in the air.  Only ravens wheel about the sky where last week the mocking bird chortled his panoply of songs.  The walnut is baring its soul and the grape vine shines pure gold in the cool afternoon sun.  In California one question looms large: will it rain?  The long drought has frustrated our banana trees so they have forgotten how to put forth their fruit– a golden meal we have been treated to for the previous five years.  We assume the drought is the fault of global warming which we were reminded of by a story in this morning’s L A Times.  It seems that the Alaska island, Kivalina, is threatened with rising water, the result of global warming.  GWE, (global warming effect) touches wherever we live.

Let’s talk about haikus.  I have had the privilege of corresponding with Mrs. Abigail Friedman, author of "The Haiku Apprentice."   During a two year stretch as a Foreign Service Officer in Japan, she managed to immerse herself in the study of haiku and the book is the result.  For anyone interested in haiku, it is a must read.  I go back to it often to try to steady my own work.  Like many American writers of haiku I tend to be brash, I tend to like a strong statement with a strong pivotal last line that comes across whammo!  As I see it, there is more delicacy in the Japanese approach to haiku.

This is a recent haiku from Mrs. Friedman which I liked:

end of summer –

in my son’s room

I try on his shoes

I liked it because, first, it amused me–a mother trying on her son’s shoes, then I wondered about her son, how old is he?  how big are his shoes?  where would she wear them? is she thinking of hiking?  and so on. 

Since war is much with us these days, I’d like to close with a war poem:

Memoriam

There are no medals, no monuments

For the first and last of any war

No posthumous praise to brighten

The endless days of death, only

The silent cadence of those who

Came after the first and before the last

To keep them company, and some small

Item in the newspaper with their name.  *

Au revoir.

*From "Blue Flame ~ Selected Poems" by R. Dean Tribble

September 23, 2007

September greetings

Filed under: Poetry, Politics, Social Issues — R. Dean Tribble @ 4:20 am

Today’s Haiku:

Golden leaf
Whips wildly in the wind
Clinging for last goodbye.

On Being A Seven Times Grandfather

Tomorrow, my seventh grandchild, Alexander Enrico Vallecillo, will celebrate his two weeks birthday. He has made good progress in getting used to this old world. He has developeded the art of complaining, a sure sense of where his sustenance is to be found and he is now pooping on schedule. I bring this event up because I like being a grandfathr. Seven tmes I have been lavished with congratualations. The parents are lauded too, of cousrse, but they are so taken up with the wonderful new responsibility thrust upon them, they have little time to savor the plaudits. Three of these grandchildren are no more than two so my chances of seeing them to maturity are somewhat slim given that I am almost 92. The teenagers are already trying to sort out colleges so the pleasure of seeing them grow up has been mine. But not to fret, I will see cuteness and fun from the little ones to brighten my old age.

On Impulse

How many times have each of us acted on impulse, sometimes not to our best interests. It happened eighty years ago and he was dead before I could open my mouth to shout. Although I have forgotten his name (Let’s say its Jim), I’ve never forgotten that awful gash in his head from the train wheel.
“She’s going too fast,” said the stationmaster, and Jim nodded in agreement. “Guess I won’t go to town today.” Then goaded by some hidden impulse he made a run and grabbed at a ladder rung. His foot missed the bottom step, the speed of the train flung his body in between the boxcars, tearing loose his grip, letting him fall to the rails below. The next day at lunch in our one-room school I was the center of questions as being the only school kid who saw the whole affair. Miss Tetrick was wiping her eyes and I said “Let’s go play some catch.” We used to tease her about him being her beau. I guess he was.

It happened so fast no one really could be sure how. The bicyclist speeding downgrade, whipped around the lowered gates. Someone shouted, “Stop! Stopl” The rider angled across the tracks to go round the opposite gate as if to taunt the oncoming train. The engine clipped the bike’s rear wheel, so close was the rider to making it across. The bike flipped around to the side of the engine slamming the rider’s head against it.

It was this second event that brought up the memory of the first. The fact each acted on a sudden impulse to challenge a train, though years apart, and that impulse lead to their death, a reminder how easy it is to be our own destructors.

Today’s Poem:

Moon’s Day

There were five angels sitting on my doorstep
This morning, none of whom could speak English
But then neither could I so we got along fine.
I mentioned I had just learned about my ancestor,
The flat worm, and how much I owed
Him/her for the invention of sex,
They told the phases of the moon for me
And how they affect women’s ovaries
And sometimes drive men mad.
This from five angels who couldn’t speak English.

August 2, 2007

Saturday Night Thoughts

Filed under: Poetry, Politics — R. Dean Tribble @ 5:40 pm

I’m writing this on a Saturday night and that merits a poem:

JUKEBOX SATURDAY NIGHT

Here I sit in reverie as speakers thunder out
Chatanooga Choo Choo, Blues In The Night
And Beat Me Daddy Eight To The Bar
I belt out Night and Day with Sinatra
And whistle to Alexander’s Ragtime Band.

What’s in a song but memories? The girls
We danced with, the night clubs that took
Our money, the early dawns that saw us to bed
The hangovers, those one after another flirtations
Oh, the music goes down and around, oh ho, oh ho

And it comes out here by my rocking chair.
Reverie no longer equals recall for the muscles
That knew a hot beat at a younger age.
On this leather rocker arm, only my fingers
Dance to a Jukebox Saturday Night

Politics
Sitting here in my rocking chair I’m thinking, if the Democrats win in “08 as seems likely, this war, though started by Bush, will be the Democrat’s war to win or lose. This aimless banging away at Bush with resolutios and deadlines by Democrats when they know they can’t beat down his veto is such a waste of effort. They will need the Republicans , howeverr few they may be, to help set the country on the right track. To that end, I would like to see the Democrats concentrate on how we can undo the world view of an arrogant America, bring our troops home in a sensible manner (I think the Democrats will find they cannot pull the troops home nearly as soon as their rhetoric has promised), restore our defence forces to an effective strength level. These are big ticket items, and we shouldn’t wase amy more time bashing Bush, much as I would like to see him punished. Actually I feel a little sad about Bush. I thrilled to his response to 9/11. He rallied the nation and defeated the Taliban, setting up a new govennment in Afghanistan. He was my man. And then Iraq. Even as he was contemplating it out loud, I sent a protest e-mail (It was never acknowledge, nor was the one to Colin Powell). From then on he was downhill in my mind and in the country’s mind. I’m tempted to say I will never write of Bush again, but that would be foolish. His is our president and I have to respect the office he holds.,

Today’s Haiku

When you hoard the grain
And I starve to death
We both lose.

That’s 30 for today. Dean

July 7, 2007

GETTING “CEREUS”

Filed under: Poetry, Politics, Social Issues — R. Dean Tribble @ 1:29 am

TODAY’S HAIKU:

When sleep takes over
Dreams appear.
Why are you not in them?

_________________________

July 5, 2007 Last evening, after watching the fireworks from the vantage of our hilltop, we came home to find our Night Blooming Cereus about to bloom. We called our neighbors over to share the event. The four of us stood around, almost holding our breath. First, the slender outer green petals began to peel away from the white bulb of the tightly compacted petals. We waited. Finally one white petal snapped out. Then another. Then so quick that if you had blinked, you would have missed it, the entire blosson snapped almost fully open, white, pure and glowing. We all gave a shout as if it was a game score. Two more blossoms opened in sequence in the same manner. We just sat there watching. Finally one neighbor remarked, “The beauty of seeing these open outdid all the fireworks I’ve seen tonight!”

NIGHT BLOOMING CEREUS

Out of heaven came this flower
So white, precisely petaled, so perfumed,
There is about it no aspect of earth
Though, by heaven’s consent, of earth it bloomed;

In deference to lesser forms it stays aloof
Of sunlit hours and keeps a secret tryst
With those of us who seek at dark
This beauty, this fragrance none can resist:

For early risers keen of mind at dawn
It lags behind the going away of night
Granting one more glimpse of fleeting grace
Before it folds and bows its head contrite.

From Blue Flame ~ Selected Poems
by R. Dean Tribble
_______________

Let’s get political and talk about the Democrats. Just so you know where I’m coming from, I became old enough to vote for Franklin D. Roosevelt in his second term, and, with the exception of Dwight Eisenhoower, I have voted Democratic ever since. I think of myself as a moderate though I am by no means a locked-in-Democrat. If McCain had made it in his bid, I would have seriously considered him.

That said, perhaps you will allow me to express my disappointment with the Democratic members of Congress. They seem to be so busy being anti-Bush that they have not put forth any ideas pro-country. Surely they could see that Bush, for all his low-rating in the country, holds all the aces till end of his term, (short of impeachment). But what did they do? Push forward useless resolutions that got nowhere. It is my hope that now they will put their heads together and come up with real solutions to move this country forward.

Enough said. Dean

July 4, 2007

Independence Day

Filed under: Poetry, Social Issues — R. Dean Tribble @ 7:39 pm

Today’s Haiku:

Each day is special
Today more special
For being now.

July 4, 2007. It’s been 231 years since the fathers of our country met during hot, sultry days in July and signed the document that brought death and ruin to some but freedom and a glorious future for gnerations to come. They were truly men of courage. I am proud to call myself an American. And I am proud to mention an ancestor who served his country in the Revolutionary War. Allow me to salute him here:

TO ANDREW TRIBBLE
CHAPLAIN, CONTINENTAL ARMY

He was a man of the cloth who carried a gun,
That ancestor of mine, who marched
With the Continentals, prayed with
And for them, wrote their letters
Propped up their courage and prayed
Their souls into the after-life.

Tortured by doubts that are the mark
Of human frailty when that which we pray for
Seems forever to elude us, yet, like
The objects of his benedictions,

He kept on, Trenton, Morristown,
Brandywine, Germantown, Valley Forge–
How does one inspire the fighting spirit
Of a shivering soldier at that camp of despair,
Who leaves bloody footprints in the snow
And chews the bark of trees to ease his hunger?

In those days of fervor, praying for a loaf
Of bread was praying for victory,
A blessing on a newsprint to pad a worn boot
Was a plea for God’s help to smite the enemy.

When Cornwallis marched this soldiers out
With guns reversed onto that dusty Yorktown field,
Andrew’s faith , if ever it wavered, surely soared.
I would he could have known, as I know,
The vast portent of that day.

From Blue Flame, Selected Poems by R. Dean Tribble

God bless our country and all its people.

June 6, 2007

The NEWS

Filed under: Social Issues, Weather — R. Dean Tribble @ 4:52 pm

Good morning, good afternoon, good evening everybody whoever you are, whereever you are  Let the day spin its orbit, we’re ready for it.  

 In the newspapers  this morning< Apparently sin pays.  The front page was covered by pornographic stories.  To their credit there were no pornographic pix. One porn star featured was reputed to earn upwards $7000 a week.  For her, sin certainly pays.  And why not?  She provideds a service, though scarcely needed, but much sought after.  And Hustleer Mag is eager to shell out a million cash for a juicy Congressional sex affair.  That might give some future testosterone charged males pause.  Yep.  Sin pays.

 The weather:tango:   When I grew up on a ranch in Wyoming, we looked out the window first thing in the morning to see what the weather was like.   Now we watch the weather tango.  Against a swirling backgound of clouds, simulated seashores, and snow-capped mountains, a smartly dressed athlete dances about waving arms and pointing at the weather this and the storm that and in oratorical tones pronounces the minute degree of temperature we can expect for he next seven days.  A drop of rain indicated on the screen brings on a frenzy of explantions meteorlogical.  One thing we don’t get is the meadow lark’s song. 

Have a nice day. Dean

    

Beginnings

Filed under: Poetry, Politics — R. Dean Tribble @ 3:39 am

I am R. Dean Tribble and if anybody cares I will be most grateful. I’m starting this blog because I’ve been wanting a place where I could freely rant and rave about poetry, politics, people, and places. If some wanderer out there in the ethernet stumbles onto this site he is welcome to speak to it and it will listen and perhaps quote him.

Let’s start out with a bit of poetry, to whit, a quatrain which I used for the Foreword to my book of poems “Blue Flame.” I think it is appropriate for here.

BEHOLD THESE LINES
Behold these lines and read them well
Nor ever fret their little seeming
Within in them are the thoughts they tell
Between them lies a world of dreaming.

A lot of meaning can be packed into four little lines. One of the most beautiful to my mind is by Edwin Markham. I’ve forgotten the title but you can never forget the lines:

He drew a circle that shut us out,
Heretic, rebel, a thing to flout,
But love and I had the wit to win,
We drew a circle the took him in.

How can you top that?

There’s quite a debate being reported on the proposed immigration bill which has inspired me to write this:

IMMIGRANT

Let me not be a stranger in your land
Unwanted, unwelcome, spurned
Because I speak not well the English
Shunned if my skin is dark,
Or I pray to gods of another sort.

Let me hear a welcome in your voice
Feel the warming touch of your hand,
Let me share your dream and know
I have met a wise and gracious friend.

I will pick your cauliflower, dig your trenches
Paint your houses, haul your trash,
Clean your toilets, live in cramped rooms
I will work as your forefathers
Worked to make America great.

Let me not be a stranger in your land.

I think we sometimes forget that we are all descendants of immigrants. Even the American Indians got their immigration visas a few thoudand years ago from the Asian continent. Immigrants have made and will cintinue to make America

Thanks for reading, Dean

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